Page 9 - November 18th, 2011, 4:20 pm
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Whoa! [Posted by ZivXanthus on November 18th, 2011, 4:23 pm]

Hey guys!

Yes another update two days earlier than its supposed to be. Got too many group projects going on and too many dance practices happening... busy busy boy here :(

Anywho, I'm not happy with my writing on this page. I feel like it's cliche and too much. Should have edited it more properly... gosh, me and my laziness =/

I'll make sure to step up my writing for the next pages and chapters.

Thanks again to Esun130 and Kuroi_Hitsuji for working so hard!

Special thanks to the fans! <3 I hope you continue reading :)

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[Posted by ZivXanthus on November 18th, 2011, 4:24 pm]

Old man: "and i think you're ready.."
Yuki: "ready for what?"
Old man: "some sexin!"

hahaha, sorry, while re-reading this I realized how perverted my mind can be OTL

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[Posted by kuroi_hitsuji on November 19th, 2011, 1:29 am]

I must say the color makes him look like Yagami Light. It's not a bad thing, it's just an observation. XDDDD

Also, Xanthus-san, it's not too late? Please look over your script and change what you can already.

There's a big school project going on so I'm not sure I can update too fast on this anyway. OTL

[Posted by ESun130 on November 19th, 2011, 1:56 pm]

I have no idea who Yagami Light is. ~

Also, like kuroi said, tis not too late to change your script. =)

[Posted by ZivXanthus on November 19th, 2011, 3:28 pm]

Bahahaha, the last panel kind of looks like him...

Light is from Death Note (I despise that anime/manga soo much lol.. .mainly because it's overly popular amongst my friends).

Well, I only have the pages after this conversation with teh old man, so I can't do anything =/ But I'll try to look over my chapters i have written and see how it goes

[Posted by BlackFire_Chan on December 19th, 2011, 8:23 pm]

ohohohoh :DDD

[Posted by -Ruu-the-Dasher- on February 15th, 2012, 8:55 pm]

Freakin' interesting...!!! Love the middle panel, so cool!!

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